Key Improvements:

1. Structure: Organized for readability and keyword placement.

2. Features Highlighted: Emphasizes “2-Pack,” “Leakproof,” and “Includes Ice Storage Container.”

3. SEO Optimization: Includes keywords like “Ice Cube Trays,” “Freezer,” and “Silicone Ice Molds.”

4. Clarity: Clearly states the product’s key features and color.

5. Character Efficiency: Keeps the title concise while including all essential details.

This version is concise, informative, and optimized for both customers and search engines.